American History—something we all learn about. Those great American patriots who fought for our freedom, but what about those whose kindness has slowly vanished from mainstream America.
Do I need to change any grammar? The way I word things? How would you do it?
Any help is appreciated
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American History—a subject about which we've all learned. Those great American patriots who helped fight for our freedom. But what about those patriots whose great works have slowly vanished from mainstream America?
I fixed the grammar here, and reworked the 2nd sentence a bit. You might want to change it yourself, but you should keep it to where instead of just saying, "but what about those whose kindness," you should say, "those 'whoever,' whose kindness," or whatever endowment you wish to give them. I chose patriots again because it seemed the thing to do, but it was only my personal thought, not my recommendation. "Great works" is only a thought as well, not a recommendation, either.
I hoped this helps, and I hope I didn't overstep my bounds here.
American History—something we all learn about. Those great American patriots who fought for our freedom, but what about those whose** kindness** has slowly vanished from mainstream America.
--Change" Kindness"
Hope that helps some <3
American History—something we all learn about. We hear about those great American patriots who fought for our freedom, but what about those whose kindness has slowly vanished from mainstream America?
Something we can all afford learning is American History. Great American patriots fought valiantly for our liberties, but their kindness has withered away from the bosom of mainstream America today.