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A time to embrace a time to refrain from embracing
A time to get, a time to lose
A time to rend a time to sew
A time to keep silence a time to speak
A time to love a time to hate
A time war, a time of peace
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I'm not sure who sings that song, I think it may be the beetles, you may have to ask in the songs section who sings it. Anyhow, I feel that this song has a lot of meaning, it is also as many people do not know located in the Bible, in Ecclesiastes Chapter 3
I feel that every person in this world could relate to this simple song, verses in one way or another at some point and time in their life. I feel it holds the deepest truth one could ever seek.
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The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost
Can't go wrong with that, talk about your choices in life. Good luck!
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i have several poems for ya man i wrote them myself
That Christmas Meaning
Can you speak on Christmas Day
of your spirit that i pray
that every day of every year
you might spread some christmas cheer
do you tell of peace on Earth
or does it matter what it's worth
do you tell of Santa and toys
what he gives to girls and boys
of every race and every size
or it it just that morning surprise
to find something that you've always wanted
or is it hope your family has bonded
but i ask you this today
think of Christmas in every way
this of Jesus that was born
and what his family had to mourn
what he did for you and me
just so that we might see
the gates for all that we may look
it's right here in this little book
it tell the stories from Jesus to Paul
whom Jesus himself so graciously called
but that's a story for another hand
i am but on simple man
I'm here to tell you the birth
and why Jesus came to this Earth
he did it to drown all our sins
to take our losses and make them wins
to spread the love to all around
so all can hear a joyful sound
as i stand here today
i want you to tell them what i say
let them know what Christmas means
and the the Earth might not be so unclean
The Room
Through the daze of the world around
she found sanity in a room unbound
the four walls conveyed it all
and broke her emotional fall
she searched the room with mortal hands
but only felt a no-mans-land
although she found no presence of others
she stayed calm in search of another
then panic and fright soon filled her heart
and she knew she was falling apart
though this void shielded her emotions
in her mind it caused great commotion
it sapped her strength with no remorse
and she died there with unbelievable force
Read this poem and see if you relate to it...
The great thing
is not having
a mind. Feelings:
oh, I have those; they
govern me. I have
a lord in heaven
called the sun, and open
for him, showing him
the fire of my own heart, fire
like his presence.
What could such glory be
if not a heart? Oh my brothers and sisters,
were you like me once, long ago,
before you were human? Did you
permit yourselves
to open once, who would never
open again? Because in truth
I am speaking now
the way you do. I speak
because I am shattered.
Louise Gluck
I have a brother that gets in a lot of trouble, and this song really helps me out.Read it, it's really good. oh yeah, and its by Jewel.
"Little Sister"
Hey little sister I heard you went to Mr. So and So, knock knock knockin on his door
again last night, said you needed it bad-
you know that ain't right
'Cause so many times you've come to me cry-crying
trying to stop. you said it hurts so bad
But please don't let you
go back for more
My little sister is a Zombie in a body
with no soul in a role she has learned to play
in a world today where nothing else matters
but it matters, we gotta start feeding our souls
Not our addiction or afflictions of pain
to avoid the same questions we must
ask ourselves to get any answers
We gotta start feeding our souls
have been lost to the millions with lots
who feed on addiction selling pills and what's hot
I wish I could save her from all their delusions
all the confusion
of of a nation that starves for salvation
but clothing is the closest to approximation
to God and He only knows that drugs
are all we know of love
Every day we starve while we eat white bread
and beer instead of a hadshake or hug
We spill the pills and sweep them
under the rug
My little sister is a Zombie in a body
with no soul in a role she has learned to play
in a world today where nothing else matters
but it matters, we gotta start feeding our souls
Hey little sister I heard you went to Mr. So and So's
Knock, knock, knockin' on his door again last night
Said you needed more
Oh yes, the song is by the Byrds:
To every thing turn turn turn
There is a season turn turn turn
and to every purpose under heaven
a time to plant
a time to pluck up that which is planted
a time to kill, a time to heal
a time to break down, a time to build up
a time to weep, a time to laugh
a time to break down, a time to build up
A time to cast away stones
A time to gather stones together
A time to embrace a time to refrain from embracing
A time to get, a time to lose
A time to rend a time to sew
A time to keep silence a time to speak
A time to love a time to hate
A time war, a time of peace
.
I'm not sure who sings that song, I think it may be the beetles, you may have to ask in the songs section who sings it. Anyhow, I feel that this song has a lot of meaning, it is also as many people do not know located in the Bible, in Ecclesiastes Chapter 3
I feel that every person in this world could relate to this simple song, verses in one way or another at some point and time in their life. I feel it holds the deepest truth one could ever seek.
ummmmm dont u listen to the radio n a song comes on and u like it cuz u somehow relate to it?
that could help...