Feels forced to me, but can I get your thoughts please?
All this anger
Passive or not
It's built up iside me
Yet the reasons are lost
It's like an avalanche
Waiting to begin
Needing the heat
To thaw the anger in me
Something to push it back
Before the start of the avalanche
Will I find the warmth I need
To counter the freeze inside me
I just hope I can make it one more season.
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Forced, cliche, navel gazing.
Are you reading good published poetry?
Man, you're so good, can you also make songs?