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Really good! im guessing you didnt write this on the guitar, because there is a few timing issues, but apart from that a solid start, dont get to deep with it though, try and remain angry throughout the song.

I liked it, but it needed some help! I rewrote this to help you out, hope you like it!

I did put pen to paper, to see what would come out

Am trying to be positive, but shrouded in self doubt

Some memories of childhood, did keep coming back

That was beginning of self doubt, no really that's a fact

It's very good (:

I like this. this is neat.