It is for my argumentative research paper which i will be passing the final paper tomorrow so i need urgent responses.

here's my TS: film piracy is justified in the Philippines because of the country's economic instability and weak enforcement of laws with regard to intellectual property.

As i've revised my paper, i realized that its not only the two mentioned factors that contributed to rampant film piracy and i also would like to add advent of internet, consumer's buying preference and mentality that ' its not that bad..who am i hurting anyway?'

how should i reconstruct my TS now?

**** i would also appreciate any suggestions that could help strengthen my stand.tnx! ^_^